All Comments on 'Double Trouble'

A few typos, saying "him" when it's supposed to be "her", which causes a moment of confusion. However, a really well written story that does a great job of walking the line of pushing a character outside of their boundaries without making them truly uncomfortable or moving into the "nonconsentual" category. I wish triad relationship dynamics were this easy to navigate in real life.

Thank you for your observations, I did read over it couple times and ran it through spell check more than once but I guess some things got over looked. Yes I tried my best to keep it on a line that didn't border non consensual or anything forced. Lol.. Some relationships do work out like that... I have seen some.. but thanks again for your feedback it's deeply appreciated.