All Comments on 'Double Trouble'

Love the story. I think it was great. AAAAAA++++++

It was a nice one.....Thank you.

I read your words at the beginning but I have to say I enjoy your incest stories the most. They are never just about the sex, always a loving relationship is the most important piece. I enjoy the one on one stories but I love "A family affair" the most, you juggle so many relationships so well. I hope you're going to give us an episode covering the group holiday in the pacific, that's going to be epic and so complicated I'm sure. Please keep the incest coming.

Peter Harrison

Really enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing.

I certainly enjoyed it and rated it 5 *. I did like that when the MC found out his wife was cheating on him, he got angry and broke up definitely with her. Many other authors would have made him join the group sex and he would have been delighted to share his wife. Other authors would have made him reconcile with her because "love" forgives everything. I don't like those kinds of stories.

I did like that it was a story about love and lust. Contrary to most stories on this site they formed a committed relationship. Most other authors would have introduced other guys to make the story more "interesting". This story fulfills my biggest fetish: the girl/s is/are so in love with the guy that she/they are not interested in any other guy and are (and remain) totally faithful.

5 stars is not enough. Fabulous tale.

Tc

Wordy and repetitive in spots, your story was still a good read. I found the descriptions of sex lacking and I'm not a fan of starting sentences with adjectives, but I still enjoyed your story. Thank you.

Fantastic story. Thanks

I really liked this story. Was sorry it ended. Thanks.

This was a great story...thank you.

Who ever said that three's a crowd needs to read this story. Had me wondering how they were going to pull off living and having children together, but it worked itself out for the story. Wasn't aware that Australia allowed bigamy or polygama, but I'm not going to worry about it. Good story, good enough to make a mess in the front of my panties, but I was able to finish the story :) Thanks

If you wail on a man's balls with a cricket bat, he'll likely die from internal bleeding. So, those two guys should be dead.

I agree that this was a great story. I don’t mind saying I was aroused from the time he was released from prison and took that first shower with his sisters. The ‘taboo’ aspect makes the sex so much hotter.

Outstanding!!!!!!

Absolutely fantastic.

Wonderfull!!

Awesome job! 5/5

Personally, if I had written this, I would have had the judge be extremely sympathetic and handed down a bare minimum sentence of two years house arrest and probation. But that's just my opinion. I don't really see the point that you were seeking to make by having him serve such a long sentence as far as the story's needs go.

Really good story.

I feel now the same way that Mark felt when they went back to their place after a lusty and loving weekend. The good thing being we can always revisit, which I something I do constantly I have no problem rereading a story if it's good enough. Also of course they will never get any older the girls will always have the perky young bodies as they had in their teens. And Mark will always be able to pleasure them with his divine(ing) rod. And of course he will always have eye candy. Although one always wonders about the next generation, what will be their attitudes to each other and will incestuous relationships develop again will they be tolerated or even welcomed,

Always a wonderful story. I admit that I do enjoy you work in the incest category the most but I've enjoyed everything I have read of yours.

A beautiful love story! I must add that the thought of a get together with red-headed twin ladies definitely fuels the fire.

CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Good story! 5 BIG FAT TWINKLING STARS!

Wonderful tale of genuine love. I'd like to give it a score over a 5!

Still crafting a very nice tale. Carry on.

Marvellous !!!

Well done! I so love the stories set in Australia. And your writing is very good. This is the first one I've read. I'll be busy for days reading the rest. So good!

Very few stories are so beautiful they bring tears to my eyes. This one did. Wish I could give it more than 5 stars

Great story

Five**5**Stars...emotionally appealing, makes the read that much better!!

And, the family knowing about it...Dad, his sister...daughter/niece/cousin...did She ever get 'done' by Mark or Dad?? Enquiring (nosy) minds want to know!

🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋

Great story, wonderful.

Quite excellent!

Well done. Enjoyed the story line immensely. Good editing too. Keep writing.

XYZ

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Tres Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

A very enjoyable story well told.

Yeah l did like, it brought back memories of my own cousin, back in the sixties and seventies.

We had a relationship going from 13 to 19 until we were found out.

Her parents moved her away to Perth as well. Unfortunately they shamed her and we have not spoken since she left.

I saw her and her family at her mothers funeral in Toowoomba, she ignored me completely, even when l introduced my wife and family to her and her family. Embarrassing isn’t the word for it. It hurt.

I had told my wife about her when we married, lt was the past she did not mind.

After Toowoomba my wife said forget her, she’s forgotten you, l did.

Your story brought those memories back.

Scores 5/5

Enjoyed your story. Keep writing and submitting well written stories.

I ENJOYED IT...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Great work and I could see everything in my mind's eye.

I love this story and would highly recommend this story, and your work in general, to anyone reading this review. Good plot, good characters (Mom seems less developed, but no more was necessary, showing your ability), and good eroticism.

Five for you

I really enjoy your work. You are too good of a writer for me not to say this: you have a real problem with reflexive pronouns. In this particular story, this problem is with usage of "myself."

From your intro: "Any editing mistakes are owned by myself."

Myself is tricky for a lot of people. It is reflexive, and a reflexive form is really only proper in English when both the subject and object of the sentence are the same.

Your sentence would read, "Any editing mistakes are owned by me."

A simpler version of that sentence would be "Any editing mistakes are mine."

Also, "I own any editing mistakes" says the same thing. This structure deletes the prepositional phrase entirely, and is less clunky.

Most times, one could just rewrite any such sentence with less clutter by refusing to use "myself," or other reflexive form. This is almost the easiest rule.

I (subject) hold myself (object) accountable for any offense from this editing note.

Blame me for any offense related to this editing note.

I do generally love your stories but not this one. I have difficulties to explain why. Seems a little missing of charm. The two twins seems like two clean dolls. Missing spirit. A little boring once the three are together actually. Missing of surprises.

I respectfully ask you to consider getting an editor - owning your grammatical errors is brave, but why not get rid of them? For example “my pizza arrived, knowing I would use the Coke as a mixer…” - that’s a very intelligent pizza…

It's too bad he had to go through the pain that he did, but it did set the stage for him to be isolated from other women long enough for the twins to stake their claim.

Great story.

That was a good story had a nice build up and everything

As well as Derlichs. Still it was an enjoyable ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ read for me…

Double Trouble indeed, though with a title like this, I would have expected the twins to be more bratty. I also noticed that they were more like one person hosted by two separate (though identical) bodies. Always acting together, always "we", always acting as one... where my personal experience with twins have shown that while they love their similarities, they also tend to forge out differences between each other in order to be their own person. The way these two were, I would expect they have the same job for the same company doing the same thing, driving the same kind of car, liking the same foods, same drinks, etc. etc. etc. As to other things, I loved the way you wrote it. Character driven and not just sex this, sex that, sex the other thing, and oh... btw... SEX! That gets soooo tiring to see in so many other writers stories. Definitely one of my favorites. Keep up the good work!

I have to agree with a few comments I don't see why you felt the need to have the judge sentence him for that long in prison that part wouldn't have done anything to hurt the story if it was a shorter sentence or house arrest with probation for a few years

I loved this story. Interested to read one about Mom/Dad/Mary.

um cindy and Dani dont rhyme.......................

For me, a GREAT story! I loved the set up/back story. I think in enhanced the story after returning to the Present. Great balance of love story to intimate paragraphs. I look forward to reading more of your work

My best to you and your family.

sd31r20

Excellent story. Read through the whole story and enjoyed it immensely.

Great story. I swear this guy can't miss. I've been reading his stuff all afternoon and I haven't read a bad story yet.

Unique approach to bro & sis incest. 5 start! Well written

It seemed he had the worst of taste to start, but the best of luck in the end.

Sex scenes are too fast

A bone line story ? if thats not cheating......... Almost docked you a star ! Great story ! Thanx !

A classic. One of my favourites by one of my favourites. Bitches like Simone really do need to die in a fire. Hard to believe people like that exist and do the shit they do. Glad everything worked out for Mark in the end and he found not one but two wonderful lovers to give him everything he ever wanted.