All Comments on 'Double Trouble in Helia'

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Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Lorealmost 3 years ago

Good start to series. You might get some low votes because there was not an erotic couple. The pacing is good, a mix of sex and story.

One thing I have noticed on here is that the titles of the stories seem to matter. 'Guy with two dicks fucks coeds' will likely get more reads than 'Uni student hand job from nurse', more reads means more followers, means more likes.

harroldfruit2harroldfruit2almost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the suggestion.

Comments mean a lot, since they take time and effort.

The story is placed in the "Erotic couplings" section, because it doesn't really fit anything else in my opinion.

Some later entries will certainly feature an erotic couple, or even more, but I've only just completed the second chapter.

I'll change the title of that part to something more fitting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Interesting premise. Fairly certain it's a first for me to read. Keep at it. Looking forward to more.

booobpbooobpover 2 years ago

YES!!! a double dick story, why didn't I find this before.

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