All Comments on 'Double Vision'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Really

Neither Safe nor Sane. What if she accidently drowned? You'll tell the police my bad? Yeah, right. Stupid, dangerous story. One star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Waste of time

I agree not S&S at all and total cluelessness.

Water is not a lubricant and anybody who has ever done anal knows it. Go back to leaving the impossible fairytales in your head, or write them using gnomes, dwarfs, or mermaids because people can not even attempt this foolishness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Not Safe; Not Sane, but definitely erotic. Waiting for a description of the evening, and the threesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
😝

🚫 ( )*( ) for you.

Sepsis from rectal damage and dry drowning from inhaling water aren't sexy. Beyond the 'rough' sex, they come across as basically unpleasant people. However, the no holds barred personalities are necessary to create the animalistic scene, I suppose.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

It was a lot of fun and really hot. Hope there is more.

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