All Comments on 'Down by the River Ch. 02'

by silver_firefly

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spearishspearishabout 11 years ago
*sigh*

She's one lucky lady ...two great men !! anyone got a map to the nearest forest with a river ? Great writing and good rounded characters .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love this story!

Marcus seemed sweet, but Lucas has a more developed character. I do like Lucas better! You write wonderfully. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
it's so good

so far, please don't let it end in tragedy

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