All Comments on 'Down Old Mexico Way'

good plot line and well written

Why cant real life be as much fun as this story

I went to Mexico, and all I got was this broken heart.

I went to Mexico, and all I got was this fetish for maids.

A good story which is well written. However, I think that the author should have had the maid speak some English, or he some Spanish, or a combination thereof. They could then have communicated some basic things such as their feelings to each other.

Additionally, the story could have gone on with him pursuing her to Mexico City, taking her back with him to the states, and on and on. .... with a meaningful relationship coming about and bilingual kids. But good story of limited scope.

RAG

...but, a rather serious mistake on the author's part.

He vacationed at this place in Mexico, "back in his younger day," when they had DIGITAL CAMERAS, with large memory cards! I don't think so.

You forgot... Ever so many commas. I like the idea, a lot. But, you could do better with camma usage.

I enjoyed the story so much that I didn't notice the comma situation. I did think about the time frame during which the digital camera was invented....but only because I'm an amatur photographer. The story wasn't too short either and I thought it accomplished what the author intended ..... kinda like a "Strangers in the Night" sort of idea. TXRAD, I think it's terrific that you always fall in love with the females you write about. Leighlilly

Commas..what commas? Totally over looked them. The story was very well written and in a very real..down to earth manner. Never occured to me there was something "not right"

with the camera thing. I enjoyed the story very much.

loved your story. please put more scenes of analingus and guys licking the girl's ass for a long long time. i love reading your stories. you're the best

Great story, as you told the story I felt that I was right there with you all the way, Like it was me with her and you where telling my story. The only thing I was missing was a pic of her. I love it all, Xcept the fact that you wheren't able to see her again. Could've had more stories to tell.

Just had one the best orgasm!!!

THANK YOU!!!

GOD! You are fast becoming my favourite writer on this site!! Lovely story ... love the way you write sex! So hot...SO sexy...SO dirty...who needs words when the heat is white hot between the protagonists??? Just fuck away, I say!

At the risk of turning into an internet stalker, I'm working my way through your stories. Wow.

Great stuff. Feels real, the people, the sex, the passion and the regrets. Well played

That hit the spot for me.

"I once had a girl, or, should I say, she once had me."

Too bad, pictures would've been great

You have a winner with this story, you write perfect stories and I will have to read the rest of them, I know digital cameras didn't exist way back when but it doesn't matter. You are a perfect story writer so keep up with the good work or as we say in the south, you done good.

Loved it. I know that most of these stories are fantasy. It would had been nice if it was true, then you could had posted the pictures