by Wish4me
I really enjoyed this! It is well written, interesting, and the chemistry and passion are extremly arousing!
Great job!
We need all the heat we can get here in Ohio...thanks for warming things up here! Nice buildup!
David:)CVA
Lovely tale, I’d like to hear more. Does she turn out to be “The One” as appears likely. Does this man have a “Dark Side”? Or does She? Maybe they just ARE perfect together. This is a well structured story in it’s self but I think there are at least two more tales to be told of these characters. There are several possibilities open here. I look forward to Part Two.
Great story! Found it thanks to Dragonteeth and very pleased I did. Good build up and great sex!
This was a genuinely hot story. It definitely needs a second, follow-up chapter. I'm sure it would be steamier than this one. Thanks for the story.
this is a classic love story...did this really happen.......expected a little more but sweet enough...........hope every thing worked out later on..........