All Comments on 'Down the Block to the Right'

great story i hope you continue with it

Your description of the sex scene was one of the best I've ever read. Perhaps the woman in you has so much more to offer than what men usually write. Thank you for your wonderful work!

I don't just throw that around either. This was seriously the best erotic story I have ever read. PLEASE continue to write. I seriously have zero complaints. Please continue this story as well. I really want to find out what happens next.

Constructive Criticism: Watch your use of "they're", "their" and "there". Try to use the word "mewl" a little less.

Overall: Excellent story, five stars. A 19 year old female and a 28 year old male isn't exactly "May-December", but the plot was good and the descriptions were fabulous. I'd like to see you add a chapter 2 to this story, because I'd like to see what happens to the characters in the long term.

You should add more to it...like finish it....I'm sorry im just really interested in what happen after the weekend

The first time sex scene was very good.

A thirtysomething creeping on a girl who just graduated high school (and is already working on alienating her soon-to-be stepdaughter from her actual mother) is just gross (and I would say the same thing if the sexes were reversed. I enjoy your writing, but this one didn’t hit the mark.