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darkmind222darkmind222about 3 years ago

Well done 5 stars all bloody day

AzureAshAzureAshabout 3 years ago

Sometimes just words aren't enough; while sometimes there aren't enough words... for a story this beautiful and of this splendour, both of the above statements hold true.

A mother's love, a son's devotion and the profoundness of the scope of what the term family encompasses -- they are all brought out in a sublime, tender and heart-warming manner.

Thank you @incesting for writing this and sharing it with us; thank you so much

sp9983sp9983about 3 years ago

What were Rose's final wishes? That should have been included to wrap the story up cleanly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Really loved it.....Amazingly believe able

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The ending brought a tear rolling down my cheek. Please keep on writing stories like this.

Your newest fan

booty77loverbooty77loverabout 3 years ago

you made me nut 100% HOT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Unbelievably HOT !

Deep.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Mushy. Sweet and sexy. 5star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful piece. Splendid.

ThorlolThorlolabout 2 years ago

Dont get it, Alans mother Rose told her son to leave his family, lose his wife and let them have all the money and go to england to start at zero? Did his mother hate him?

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The stories I have written and their brief…… It Started With A Slip Of The Hand. I’ve written a spin-off of the magical story that one of my favourite authors from Lit- ‘alwayswantedto’ had written a long while back. (Unfortunately the porn police of Literotica isn’t allowin...