All Comments on 'Down Will Cum Baby, Cradle And All'

Enjoyed it! Thanks.

A great out of the box, lighthearted piece. If this one doesn't make you chuckle, you may be a prude. Thanks.

needs less cutsie play on words, and more zest.

I have a serious feeling the writer isn't well versed in sex nor has a big vocabulary. The terms are very dated.

It just was lacking in many areas though if you were trying to sell an imaginary bed you almost had me, but still missing something.

A good story of sex and sauciness not much in the way of literature but good fun nonetheless.