All Comments on 'Down Your Throat'

Little story, not erotic, just fucked up.

It was well written and sexy in spite of the main character's obvious lack of confidence. It sounded pretty realistic and I think it would be awesome if there was a second part. I'd love for Indi to take control next time around :)

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Seriously, great job (can't please everyone)! I hope you continue with this story.. if not, I'm gonna check out your profile to see what else you've written.

I enjoyed your story's humor and imagery -- I can totally see a "slutty Serena" costume showing up at Halloween parties across the nation. Great work... I look forward to reading more of your submissions.

I really enjoyed your story. I thought it was very descriptive and sensual.

I really enjoyed your story. I thought it was very descriptive and sensual.

I hope you continue the story.

This was a great piece, exciting and funny. I will be watching for more from you.

It wasn't my sorta thing, I did enjoy it but I gave you 100 cause of the mention of Shiner Bock. Something this "hollywood girl" has been missing ever since leaving TX.

Good well written story. Thank you for sharing.