All Comments on 'Downfall of the Centurion'

by RSchwuler

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DelaneymegDelaneymegover 11 years ago

I hope this end up a story of redemption. That he regains his dignity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing!!

Part 2?

The humiliation was very tantalizing.

~5 STARS~

RSchwulerRSchwulerover 11 years agoAuthor

well you can always hope :)

X15X15over 11 years ago
Great Start!

More, please write more this can be a great continuing saga!

seattledonseattledonalmost 11 years ago
Fabulous!

i truly love this story. i could see this going down without any drug. i love it that our hero has a small dick. There is so much "right on" to this story. Please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome

this would be a good story to continue. I want to know what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Want to see more!

Yes i agree, please add at least one more chapter. Really want to see further humiliation and disgrace on this former Centurion and noble man!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The sequel should have him doing nothing less than being pimped out as a common cock whore to any and all after a humiliating week of constant gangbangs to teach him his new station in life. Rich, poor, old, young thin, and especially fat will relish in using his new found talents.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Excellent work! I love reading about men in positions of power and respect being humbled and brought low! Made my own socket hard!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yes please make a continuation. This was very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Still hoping for a second part!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

This is begging for a sequel - I would love to see you continue to explore historical settings. Thanks for the amazing work!

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Kinky dom* in NY, into kinky stuff, like writing stories with a heavy mindf-ck element. All of my stories are intended to be wild and over-top fantasies with serious boundary-pushing and mistreatment of semi-willing subs. I'm not going for realism, romance or uplift. Read at y...