All Comments on 'Downpour'

You do have a nice talent. I hope that you keep using it. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Bravo on an excellent first. We will of course expect more now!

Dude can write! :)

Great job, DL. Already waiting for the next one.

Very, very nice! I don't know what took you so long to start posting your stories here, but please continue!

Short, but teasingly slow, nice attention to detail, and it was a nice ending, still leaving it open for more, but with enough closure to just stand by itself.

Very well written and nicely erotic!

That's exactly what this story made me, but you already know that! Brilliantly written, highly erotic and sexy as hell. Cheers, Ad! Your lucky missus, Katie. xxx