All Comments on 'Dr. Dad Will You Be Mine?'

She needs to be punished.

He needed to be punished. To suffer.

Excellent story! And I loved how you handled Piper. Now THIS was a love story!

She gave him plenty of oral, she didn't get a turn?

Another bonafide masterpiece by a truly talented writer.

I am very tired of "baby girl" in every other sentence. Really detracts from the story.

Anonymous, as a female I can tell you that’s just the way it goes sometimes😉

HornyVirginAngel I’m not sure what story you read but indeed he did not betray his daughter.

It was a good story except for him & Piper getting together.(you never really said what they did, did they go all the way or was it just a blowjob?) That ruined the story for me. How could she have forgiven them? She didn't even seem mad about it just jumped right into bed with him. Would of been a 5 if him & Piper didn't hook up. Piper isn't a good friend!

Sweet, fun, sexy, and hot as hell. 5 stars!

Can I give this 10 stars?????

He was Piper! I consider that betrayal. They had already expressed an interest in each other.

The clamps and piercings threw me off what could have been more authentic,

Well written, although not something that would happen except in ones dreams. But maybe a follow up to be caught and having to explain anyway still a good story.

Of your Summer Lovin series this goes to No.3 on my ranking. Excellent story well told and enjoyable to read. Piper added a dynamic that represented how we change as we grow, not all friends survive into adulthood. My two cents, keep up the great work.

Truly enjoyed this DG. Nice read, although as others have mentioned a few quick edits will make it nearly perfect. A bit of expounding on how/where the nipple clamps derived from what was presumably a bit of mutual interest would be good, but all in all - very good!

From all your advice, an edited version is waiting in Literotica submissions for release. Thanks for all your comments and I believe you'll find all the points clarified in a satisfactory manner... :)

BUT no punishment. Not my style, sorry. Lots of other writers handle that very well though!

Nice story and great, hot sex. Enjoyed reading this.

Thanks for voting for my contest stories. You know I love y'all!!

loved it! and love you. you keep me hanging on every word next.

HATE THE BITCH PIPER!!

Loved this story!! Hated the bitch, Piper!!

Really needed another chapter to show what happened when pregnancy occured

The way the story was structured I was wondering when they would get caught. Very nice story though. Thanks for sharing.

PIPER THE TOXIC BITCH FRIEND

Dumb bitches ready to give their 'best friends' to their dads.