by Bones Malone
Wow, I have never gotten off so hot in my life, I could feel her lips on my clit as I read, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more to this one!
this was a great short story, with a professional level of writing, unlike many submissions in here. Yes, it would be stellar if it was say, twice as long. Dont write a novel, but make it longer. and maybe a little more description of tongue work and more sexual positions. Read some other stories, and get ideas from them. Excellent, excellent work. Can't wait to see more.
This story was awesome. I enjoyed it. If it only it were longer! Wow! I would love to see you write more to this story! Great work!
My story may be "purile" (or puerile as it were), but I don't think it's all that bad. Yes, I'm male, and yes, I'm young, so I'm sorry if I didn't capture lesbian sex perfectly. I think most people thought the story was just fine.
only a guy with a pen name like bones malone could write lesbian sex this purile.