All Comments on 'Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Heidi - DV8'

Can't believe Literotica even let this piece of shit be posted. Don't quit your day job.

You devoted a lot of time to the scientific portion of the back-story, but with good reason. That would be my only serious critique: You could have, feasibly, edited out a significant portion of that information and spent more time on the sexual antics that occurred while "transformed". On the other hand, you wrote clearly, and paid attention to both grammar and spelling. You can tell you both outlined the story before you began, and did a good job of editing before submitting it here. Looking forward to more installments to this story line.

It's good are you going to add to it

Great story I liked it

Very creative take on an old classic. Ignore the first commenter... Why are some people like that?!

a little short but cute

He should try a different girls dna the next time.

I enjoy this story and would like to read more like if you know of any