All Comments on 'Dr. Nix Ch. 01'

Cute plot, though (as you forewarned) highly improbable.

Nice to read something on here from someone who not only doesn't rape the language, but actually wields it quite deftly.

Dreadful 'story'. Write no more, please.

Completely silly, but in a good way - nice job!

I enjoyed the story... You should definitely continue!

Loved the story! Thanks!

And I hope we see more of the utterly adorable Paula as well as the er... good doctor. :-)

This was amazing. Can't wait for chapter two!

Dr Nix is by far one of my favourite characters on literotica keep up the work.

There is no one THAT naive! Get real - or put this story in "Fantasies and Wet Dreams" where it belongs.

There is no "Fantasies and Wet Dreams" category and I specifically refer to the exaggerated nature of the fantasy in the opening paragraph. I am aware that nobody is that way in real life, that is why fiction is wonderful. Refer to my essay on my profile for a detailed look at my subject matter. Either way, it's too bad you didn't enjoy the story and I hope you find better luck elsewhere on the site! :)

Having a lady write a story such as this is hihly erotic. While some haters spout off "no one is that stupid...." it is every man's and woman's secret turn on to have that kind of control.

It made me laugh while my penis, errrrr, dick....got really hard. Need to call my GF to give her some medicine.

Lee

Nice to have a story where the situation is joyously exaggerated. Great stuff and well written, and, of course, very hot.

i love those dumb bimbo stories - and this one was really good!

please let me know if you would be interested in writing one with me in it - i would really love it! and i promise I can be a pretty decent dumb slut :)

You should definitely do a spinoff of Paula getting fucked by her brother. That would be so hot.

Great how it opens with him being frustrated by his receptionist Jocelyn and gets even better with Paula jiggling her way in. The "dumb bimbo tricked" stories always get me aroused and this one stands out in how you did it. Yes, totally unrealistic, but that's how I like my fantasy. Great how he tell her to suck off her teachers because their older cum give better medicine. So evil!