All Comments on 'Dr. Parker'

I really like it wish the end was better though

I hope that there will be more of this series!

Thanks

Sadly, yet another story unfinished.

I've read all of this submission and I know there is more just by the way you started with the first one. Please continue I have really enjoyed it so far

As far as the story presented, I found it novel and interesting. However, I felt wanting since their was no lead in story about Dr. Parker's work that is referred to in the story. Further the ending came about too quickly and left me expecting more. Therefore I gave it just 4*s.

I hope I will find a finish to this series. I have not enjoyed all the categories. (I am too much of a 'romantic'). However, in general it was extremely well written.

fine series.

although it seemed to drift.

was a real pain trying to find each part

and seems to have no Ending.

might have considered preceeding the titles with

a for part one

aa for part two

aaa for part threee

aaaa for part four

aaaaa for part five

aaaaaa for part six

etc, ,etc ,etc ,

would have made it a lot less work for the reader to find the damn story.

I hope you finish the story off you left a lot hanging in the air unfinished

I've read the whole series so far. I know you have more in that noggin of yours. Don't you think you should post them soon?

Where is the next story!!!???

Why r u letting Chantal enjoy n have mike ...while she us a witch..who break him and His fiancee up..I fucking hate her...

When will u let Mike reconcile with Shanna...

They obviously still loves reach other...

I wish mike will crush n punish Chantal when he learn the truth..

M disappointed at Mike too for not trying to reason out what made Shanna was suddenly change...he should have probe a bit.

Besides I don't think Mike will b able to hold on to his fidelity even if they got married...women r throwing themselves at him..

Totally hooked on this truly excellent series!

Loving your writing but..... Will you finish this? Please!!!!

Argh. I hate unfinished stories. And to top it off, the first chapter told us it would be 6 chapters. So I thought it was finished!

Hopefully, this will be continued at some point but I think I will wait for a chapter with 'conclusion' in the description before picking it up again.

I really would like to know what Anna's story is and how Shanna gets back together with Mike. As well as finding out how Donna enters the mix.

I agree with ResidentWeavil; I can't rate this until it is finished. When reading this and some of the other stories with characters that intersect this story, I found that I really don't like Mike Hogue. However, I have to admit that I find him to be one of the more interesting characters that I've read about recently. I don't see how he moves from his current position of having many women serve/service him (granted, very loyally and with love on many of the women's parts) to actually opening up to love three women enough to marry them.

How did he get back together with Shanna? How did he end up married to Donna and Suzie also? Who is Anna?

Please finish this story/series/chronicle?

Enjoyed the story, a little over the top but so what? It's a fun read with a lush location and lusty participants. You really need to read the first volumes to get the full flavor of the story although this can be read as a standalone.

This definitely the best of this story series. So far I have thoroughly enjoyed your work. I will read everything you have written.

Woodbgood

After reading all that has been written in all of the preceding Stories and Chapters, I have been left mightily disappointed that Our Hero and his Lady Friend haven't gotten it all together again. Anti-Climax !!

Then what about the Journalist who was writing her story? She seems to have dropped off the face of the earth. More Anti-Climax !!

A wonderful story, I do hope that you can find the time to write and tell all, who have followed this so far, that there is a happy ending for all. Please !

Great series and spawned many genres but you left way too many threads in the wind. How did Mike and Shanna get back together, how does Anna from part 1 tie in, who us Stumpy (though I am pretty sure who that one us) and how did that play out. How did the business get moved? For that matter how did Mike come to be adopted into the Royal family? Etc....

Really enjoyed this series but when are we getting part seven. Too many things left out.

I agree with the previous commenters; the story got progressively better over time, but was left unfinished. Very complex, and indeed, seems horrible of him to take Chantal back into the fold - even as a ‘sex slave’, as he does not treat her that way any more and then not forgive Shanna for a looong time.

Please finish the story.

Please complete the circle we know who the reporter's father is.

But please tie it together.

Tremendously nice reading! But, too many loose ends: who is the reporter's father, how did Mike and Shanna get together again, how did Mike come to marry Suzie and Donna, and how did the planned coup against the King transpire?

Interesting story, the powerful though kind man running things and solving problems. To bad there are not more me like that in power. It seems in most cases the old adage of "power corrupts" is more true than not. I must be getting old to love shown in your story is more important and moving than the erotic sex scenes. Still a good story I like some your others much more.

good editing as well. the odd loose end, misplaced names, but only one misplaced apostrophe!

no problem, it´s easy to miss stuff when skim editing.

thanks!

Hi Q,

This definitely needs another chapter, or maybe more. Lots of unanswered questions. Rocky could use more too!

Thanks for your stories. Good reads. Quite entertaining. Thanks.

Loved it.

So years have gone by, but no further stories. Have you given up on Hogue?

Please finish

Please complete the circle we know who the reporter's father is.

But please tie it together.

This story has been great. Love the intrigue. But as several others have commented Where the heck is the rest of it . Your stories are great but an ending would be even greater. Love the writing.

Thanks to stories like this one, written so well that the reader gets sucked into the story and the “world” created within it, I find myself looking for similar stories that contains, but doesn’t exclusively focus on sexual action. I appreciate your skill and writing prowess.

Keep up the great work!

X-Man

Really sucked. Kidnapping and restraint turns me off. No amount of great writing skills can justify a sick story like this.

A blight on society.

Bill S.

Please finish this epic saga. I have to find out what happens. Please do not do what so many authors/writers do and just stop/drop a story. There is so much more to be said.

I guess you must have got sick to death of writing about an arsehole like Mike. I can't think of another reason why you big your story up so much and then not bother to finish it. Very odd...

Thank you, Q, For giving me about 2 weeks of diving into the emotional tides of your stories. This is the last one for now, I‘ve read all of them. I cried a lot, and at many times I understood a few more things about myself. What can a reader want more. I wish I could read the end of this one. And I wish, after I digested the roller coaster of emotions, I cloud write a few words myself. Thank you!

- Days

Horrible, assault, undue influence, kidnapping are all things that cannot be justified, no matter what the background

what a tremendouse lit down get this far and bam nothing to finsh it off 1 star

Interesting possibilities but full of hole: who are Edie and Chantal? What happened to the two mob brothers? What about their boss? When happened to the king and his gay counselor? to name but a few. I have beatings like you have in the story. It is frustrating!!!

Reluctant 2*

BJ

Totally confused by this rambling.

I believe this to be one of your best series.

I wish that they were placed in consecutive order.

I would hope to find a full length book by you.

A decent story, even if it doesn't bear much resemblance to the first 2 chapters. It's too bad that qhml1 doesn't seem to have any inclination to finish it, as it's been the better part of ten years since this was posted.

Q, when you die you should will your brain to science. I’ve been reading down your story list and we’ve gone from Rambo in a skirt, traveling thru Redneck Valhalla, now to Booby Bali Hai! What goes on in that noggin of yours. Again a ten on the five scale.

You lost me in the middle of the second page. Thank goodness.