All Comments on 'Dr. Stephanie's Story'

Please continue with this story, it is a great start.

I thought it was well done and flowed nicely. Kept me reading more and more but, next time before submitting your story read it over, words flowed in together, spelling errors all over the place and words inserted that didn;t make sense. Thus ruined an otherwise very good story. Keep it up, but please proof your story next time.

Story line was great. You developed the characters nicely and their encounter was surely erotic BUT you need to clean up the text a bit before you submit. Errors did not stop from 'dampening' the spirit of your sexy tale, though.

Please get an editor. You almost ruined what could've been

an outstanding erotic tale.

Good story and build up. On the downside the story never transitioned to hot. The sex was described with no passion. Overall okay.