All Comments on 'Dragon Clans Bk. 01 Pt. 20'

But you probably already know that, don't you? I've said it in every single comment that I've left for this story, so I don't really see the need to keep repeating myself. In fact, I'd much rather leave a comment filled with praise rather than constructive criticism, but the honest streak in me won't let me until there is something to praise. The one bit of praise I can give is that the story is pretty good, aside from the plot and layout being a little convoluted.

Thanks for the continued Feedback. I am, crosses fingers and toes, hopefully with editor now. First edited chapter should be 23. Hopefully this will aleviate some of the readability issues of the stories. As always thanks for reading me. Vjax

I really enjoyed reading this and i hope that there is more to come.

Apparently one woman just isn't woman enough for our superhero Michael. He must be one hell of a man. C'mon, Michael, let's see what you've got. I'm pulling for you. Don't disappoint me!