All Comments on 'DragonForce Ch. 06'

You have really captured the Pern setting and the feeling of Anne’s characters. It’s so nice having a new Dragonriders story. Thanks

Excellent characterisation, realistic tempo and great dialogue, The introduction of Loki's acerbic outlook is a joy

I am loving the interaction between all.

Okay, I don't want to cause trouble...but you’re making antivenom from a Pernese herd beast. Apples 🍎 to apples 🍎...if the snake bite affected K'trin differently because his blood is different, then the herd beast will also have a different blood chemistry and then that should cause a similar problem with making the medication. Just saying. 😌

Even so, I still gave you 5/5.