All Comments on 'Dragons of Fraidel Ch. 03'

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sexy_southern_gal almost 16 years ago

Awwwwww

Chapter 4! Chapter 4! Chapter 4! Chapter 4! Where's chapter 4? lol. Love your writing sis. Cant wait for the next installment. whoo hoo. amazing job.

love, your big sis

Anonymousalmost 16 years ago

PLEASE, ...

... learn proper English or get an editor. You seem to have an interesting story to tell, but the poor language detracts from it. (e.g. "cause" instead of "because", mixing up of tenses etc.)

AphroditesBeloved over 15 years ago

love it! can't wait for Chapter 4!

I love Galeena! hehe :)

Anonymousover 15 years ago

LOVED IT

i have read many dragon stories and i have to say this is one of THE BEST EVER and i mean that cant wait for the rest hope to see them verry soon

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I got my BFA in Fall of 2012 and now at a crossroads on what to do with my life. I love to draw, paint, read, write, and play games. Update- June 24, 2018- Hey guys, very important update here. I was working on the next part of Dragons of Fraidel, but had to put writing on ...

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