All Comments on 'Drawing Her'

Way to go Dad.

Nice job but like all controlling Moms she is a butthead.

Love the reality of the story and the slowly increasing pace.

This story was just excellent, especially for your "first Lesbian themed post"! Everything in the story was exceptionally done, with the "Slow Burn" pacing of the developing love between Roseanne & Ji Rin being wonderful.

Drawing Her was just so well written with all levels of emotions being displayed such as "fear-anxiety-anger-compassion-compliance-bullying-lust".

Please write more, as I definitely rated Drawing Her - 5*-STARS!!!!!!!

What a delightful story this was. Looking at your drawings I was wondering if we can expect some drawings of Ji Rin? Five stars well deserved.

And eh, now you've done one in this category... more will follow?

Thank you

For a first time out, you set a pretty high bar. Looking forward to whatever comes next.

Hopefully you'll be writing more like this 😉 wonderful characters and beautifully told story! Thanks x

An extraordinarily compelling story. You told it so well that the story overshadowed the love scenes and that is something that rarely happens. Please write more,

Beautiful heartfelt story, beautiful characters. I love them <3

Great story. Writing style a little bit clunky though. Admittedly when there are scenes with just two people of the same gender it's not always easy to be clear which one you mean, without using names rather a lot, or terms like 'the Asian girl'.

There didn't seem to be much of an intro either... Maybe it was a deliberate choice to skip it, but for me the story seemed to start in a rather disjointed way.

Great characters though.

Wow loved it!!! Wish the sex scene was longer! But I still came lol

I understand what you wanted to achieve with the repeated sittings etc, that part worked well, it was the Mothers part that didn’t work for me, but hey ho, good story regardless.

Wonderful story. I love your characters! They seem so authentic and the way you slowly reveal them is almost a tease! I’m rooting for Rosanne. One of my favorite stories!

Drawing & being drawn is - or at least can be - a very intimate activity with voyeur/exhibitionist overtones. Just as so beautifully described here.

5* thanks for sharing

Dixon (UK)

Proof positive that romance can be highly erotic with almost no charged words, one might say. Some times the mere suggestion is as sexy as the more overt. 5 stars ⭐️

Beautifully written, innocent and fragile, and I like the theme of drawer and drawn. I'm working on a story of a woman obsessed with drawing a blind girl and the tension that creates because the blind character gets nothing out of it.

Thank you for writing the story, I enjoyed it!