All Comments on 'Dream a Little Dream of'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting

This seems like pretty good stuff, I would appreciate if you continued this into a series of sorts. If you want any editing help or just want to spit-ball ideas, here's my e-mail salohcinpayne@gmail.com

TeenagefujoshiTeenagefujoshiover 9 years ago
Breathtaking

One of the most interesting things I've read in a while. It was sweet but rough and that one line about her containing HIM possessively is something I've never read before - I loved it. How she seduced and used his memories to bring him pleasure was really interesting too. Though I'll be honest I'm anticipating when he wakes up. Based on his natural lovemaking abilities and strong mind, maybe this witch has met her match? ;) I sure hope so and I would be super happy if you continued this series. Truly a breathtaking read. :D

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_eover 9 years ago
Hot!!!!

Thanks for posting!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Strange. Delightfully strange.

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