All Comments on 'Dream Come True Ch. 01'

Like any reader there are some plot twist's and fetishes which really press the throttle of sexual response in a story. Putting all of those absent quirks aside, your story lacked spontaneity and character development.

thank you for your feedback, it's my first and it is in no way finished, got any top tips?

I liked it. I'm ready for chapter two.

i can't wait for part 2. i hope this will remain a story with these 2 characters. will be nice if the younger girl will be the more dominant one of the two.

Once accepted part two will be up, it's a little shorter than this one, but also part three is in the making too, I hope you guys keep enjoying this

any shorter and it is just the title line.

Nooooo!!! Too soon! Damn it! I know there has to be a chapter 2 posting tomorrow. It can't possible end with nipple foreplay. Please 38FSlut relieve me of my frustration. May we please, pretty please with brown sugar on top have a continuation soon. Thank you in advance for your mercy. Lol