All Comments on 'Dream Dream Dream Ch. 01'

this is non con hope if you do a part two she gets saved by a good dom and you get even with them

You switch between past tense and present tense often. It makes what could be an interesting story annoying and hard to read.

Loved the chastity aspect of it, need more of it maybe to keep her on the edge of orgasm denial remotely

Great story. Thank you.