All Comments on 'Dream Girl'

Ya knew it was a dream all along but for the ending to be so cutely step up by the dream's lesson - very nice. All sorts of specific details that really sharpened the story as a very clear piece. Very enjoyable read Katie and one which gave me a very happy grin at the end. Thanks!

I tend to skim many, but yours I read. Nicely done. feasible. The end, however, was rushed and implausible. I liked the dream resolution, but when he asks her out for dinner and movie right after he wakes up...well most geeks I know would've stayed in a subservient mode, regardless of how emboldened he might've been from his tasty slumber.

Very hot! The porn star name is a funny touch.

would love to read more of this story

Stephen J

Clever, sexy, and well written.