All Comments on 'Dream Logic Ch. 01'

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CliAndCliAndabout 6 years ago
Good

Great start, looking forward to more. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
good 1st chapter

Hope he fills all of her holes with sperm in the coming chapters.

yukonnightsyukonnightsabout 6 years ago

Really nice, grabbed my interest right from the beginning. Looking forward to the next parts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Rookie on the move!

Very well done indeed, especially for a first effort! Story has very good potential for further development.

Moxie72Moxie72over 5 years ago
5 stars for a single page👍 Very well done

I don’t usually give 5 stars for single page reads, but this is very well done. The plot is exciting but still has a good bit of mystery left to be intriguing...again very well done. 👍

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