All Comments on 'Dream Lover'

Very nice darlin ... hot, explosive and nasty!

I would love to be cum on like that. This made me so horny. I'm gonna go play now. Wanna watch?

That was fuckin HAWT!!! I hope you've got more writings in the works!! WELL DONE!!!

First story? Do more, fellah, that was excellent.

I really enjoyed this, and so did my toys. *blushes* My sheets and I are a bit wet now. Thank blue for the link to the story for me. *wink* It was a very intense read.

You are so naughty.. that was a delicious story!

Yummy gorgeous, very very hot.

(Sorry I haven't commented before, you can punish me if you wish)

Great story sugar, I bet I'll be dreaming of it tonight.

Very Sexy indeed Hun--please continue Sweetie-Well Done!!

that I rather liked that! :D Different, and hot - and well written too, bloody hellfire, I am a fan! ;-)

Now go and write some more, I need quality stories to read and then maybe I'll be inspired to write summat new, lol!

Yup that's exactly what I was thinking about in our earlier conversation *grins* would love to read more of your work ;)

Such a very delicious story... thank you ;)

MSH2,

This is one of the hottest things I've read on Lit in a long time. Your writing puts the reader right there. The scenario is nothing that I've ever thought about, but, trust me, I'll be thinking about it over and over again.

Thanks for sharing!

That was so hot! Thank you ;) x

you made me wet reading this

Wow! *a-hem* Very nice, indeed...

I liked the voice, you being the watcher. I love the fact that there are lots of wet, juicy orgasms, and that she teases and teases and makes him wait. I was hoping he would get to fuck her and he did. Great ending! My dreams never seem to turnout that grand. I'm glad this one did. However, if I were writing it I would have had her make him clean it up after he'd cum on her back. Then, maybe, a long, passionate kiss, but that's me and my cum-sucking fetish. But, it is your story, of course, and I loved it from beginning to end. It is the first one I've read here on Lit that I felt deserved a 5-star rating, which is what I gave it. Good job. Hope to see more from you soon.