All Comments on 'Dream of Desire'

Excellent writing style. Too bad you stopped.

You wrote everything perfectly to allow me to place myself in the mans shoes and kept the female nondescriptive so every female reader could put themselves into the writers shoes. I love this writing style and I must say it's very well perfected. Super A+ ...not that the comments of a person without a screen name really matter. Still, I wish lots more stories were written like yours. It's more fun to be a star in this type of writing perspective than it is to read about another strangers tale. Job well done..and I look forward to another night of enjoyment with you very soon. Sweet dreams