All Comments on 'Dream Siren'

This was a hot one - good luck in the competition; they'll have to do very well to beat this one! Thank you.

I found your story very hard to understand. It was very long and was hard too keep my head into it. Maybe it is that I did not find the theme that interesting. Good luck

Excellent story, I really enjoyed reading this one!

Enjoyed the unexpected turns. Really interesting and kept me reading. A great submission!

Would love to get some feedback on my stories if you have a chance. Good luck in the contest and thank you.

I'm not one to write too many comments, but this one surpassed my action threshhold.

I enjoyed this immensely as you weaved so much into the storyline, and the level of mystery you applied to keep us in some suspense through the story was nicely done.

Overall, nicely done.

Yes, that is correct. I think you are cheating. I think that Seanathon is a pen name for an established, mainstream, oft-published author who is trying out new ideas on Literotica. Your writing is far too polished and organized for an amateur.

Great story, dialogue, characterization and plot. Good job!

WOW, what a lovely and brilliant story.

Glad I stumbled across it.