by GigglingGoblin
I enjoyed the story. The character descriptions put me at ease and helped me enjoy the more explicit content.
Thanks! What's behind the nectar boy and girl? Where is the chime coming from? ~
I think you write these more ambitious 'ensemble' stories really well, but I always prefer it when it's one guy, one extended scene, and there's plenty of time for the eroticism to build up slowly. The emerald girl encounter was my favorite, but over too soon! -- and that's inevitable when there are other people to get to. By the way, I really love all the different ways you do femdom with malesubs; it's great that sometimes the guys are cocky jackasses, sometimes unassertive nice-guy types: everybody deserves to get mind-fucked, to heaven or hell :)
I definitely enjoyed this, I'm interested to see what comes next. The characters are quite funny, and I often enjoy seeing your supernaturals in the modern world.
Ooh, I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes. This has a really great ethereal, creepy vibe that just fills the story. I like it!
Ah, this was perfect. Eery, ethereal, and mysterious. Looking forward to chapter 2!