by SleeperyJim
Good continuation of an intriguing story. Character development is excellent, good story pace and this chapter as others ended in a good cliffhanger.
Loved this chapter. The caracters are becoming very interesting, just like the plot. Cant´t wait for the next one. Thank you and keep it up :)
It is your writing and ability to tell a story that keeps readers, ah, reading.
Keep the chapters coming.
This is obviously a well crafted and written story. I hope that you continue and do not leave it unfinished as some authors have annoyingly done with theirs!