All Comments on 'Dreams'

Easily one of the best stories I've ever read here. Fantastic pacing, with proper closure

I would had plenty of affairs with alot of hot female actresses and musicians

I loved the basic premise! And well written as well.

Great concept. Well written. The length was just right. Better this way than as a continuing series. Keep up the great work

Very good, Miss D! Loved it!

The two family I most fantasize about are my mom and my sister. I love your writing style which made this story very realistic. I stroked thru the entire story, edging to the last page and I could stand it no longer.

delightful, up to and if not better than your previous. More soon please.

While the premise would have to take a severe twist, I think you should continue this story.

Liked it, very different from the usual fare.

I voted five stars for this…..something which I have dreamt about myself…. Fucking my mother in my dreams as we sleep….

Wow what a great trip you took us on. So nice to see some personal growth in a character.

Excellent

excellent

What a very well constructed story! I loved it. Thank you. Now I'm off to bed, mayhap to dream...?

Good story, and I gave it a five, but I think you could have given it another chapter by having him go into the perpetrators dreams and tormenting them while he was healing. Just a thought....

This story has an enormous amount of detail in it and I realize, that it comes across as something a friend of mine tried to describe to me many, many years ago.

On a number of occasions, he had told me, that he had such realistic dreams about people he knew, that he had difficulty sorting out dreams from reality.

He passed away, but, your story makes me wonder.

Very strange. Good writing though

Great, thank you.

Well rounded story! Great reading

amazing story

Thank you for your imaginative take on a tired genre.

Particularly complicated. Felt more like it was about dream/dream state then a story with characters.

You seem to be an actual Dream Warrior (in your case Lover) too many details are embarrassingly close to the truth. Hope someday you will embark on the White Ship beyond Celephaïs and who knows, we might have a tea or something stronger!

A very good story

That was possibly the best story for a long time. I enjoyed it very much , also hardly any errors , spelling etc. Well done 10/10

Loved it, don't know if you believe in OOBE but I do. Had them as a child but not as an adult. Would have abused it if I could. Lol

Good story, the ending left me a little disappointed because I wanted to see how far it went with Joanne. It was a different twist and a good fantasy, thanks for writing.

Longer stories are much better!

Interesting concept. Could make for a very interesting full length novel

This was a great story. Very imaginative. I must admit though that sometimes I think you were dropped on your head as a child! You have a very (even though fun) active imagination. You should continue writing. You are very descriptive and tell a story quite well.

Great story! Wonderfully imaginative! I'm a little confused about the neighbors he'd visited. All thought they'd had dreams about him, yet Eleanor knew he wanted her. The ending left an opening for part 2, possibly more about his feelings for Joanne. Hope to read about it. 5⭐

"Dreams:" The story TAGS--to the right-side column--has nary a word about "anal", nor sodomy, but he definitely fucked his mother's "arse" at her request. With the frequent fucking he gave his sister Shirley, his mother Pamela and his next door neighbor Joanne, there was no mention of any protection from pregnancy. I was of course hoping that one (1) of the three (3) ladies would have been impregnated, several times!

In order to comprehend the convolution of the dream's interactions with his sister, mother and most of the female neighbors on his street, it was difficult to grasp and visualize. The respect and love he had for his mother and sister could have had more passion and familial love with his interpersonal relations with them lacked any emotions or respect.

While far out there, this story was not only very good but very readable. You have a great command of the English language. This was the first of your stories that I have read but I must admit, I am really looking forward to reading all of them!

Inspired. Great concept & execution! Clean, crisp writing & the perfect length story to convey the tale. The only thing I have to add is to question if Shirley might have the gift so she and her brother could have made some dream thruples? Well done.

Loved it..!!!

Weird but nice. The UK vernacular was slightly frustrating though . . . .