All Comments on 'Dreams Become Reality'

by TwistedRedAngel

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice start, thanks.

Please keep on posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Kinda weird but ok...

Cool story but work on the tense

amoroneamoroneover 10 years ago
I love this story

For my taste I would have enjoyed a fuller description of you and him.

I like to read about mature women, how they look and how they feel and what they think.

AthertonAthertonover 10 years ago
Very nice story!

I enjoyed this piece a lot, but would have enjoyed more detail about Kim. Thanks!

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