All Comments on 'Dreamweaver Ch. 01 - The Invention'

Fun! Thanks for posting!

Awesome start! Looking forward to more. 5*****

Lets for some breeding in this one !

A very good start! !!

For your first story on here, it shows a lot of promise. Good job mate!

Good first story. Your challenge will be the transition into the real world from the dream world when you will have to incorporate more than one person's emotions and affections. This story was really one dimensional.

Although I do not usually read scifi incest stories, this was extremely good for an author;s initial effort. The potential for a series is here. I hope the author has the mental dext to continue this story.

Great start. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Incredibly detailed and you richly used descriptive verbs to detail the scene and sensations well. Certainly maintain that approach! The only weak part would have been not slowing down the sex to intimately describe those sensations to match everything else you wrote. Great start! 5

A very unique storyline. A great way for a intelligent nerd to get some pussy.

One of the best stories I've read on here. More please, much more. Well written, and fantastic story line.

10/10 🔟🔟🔟🔟