by bigmikey357
A complete tale, so well told it seems out of place in this venue. Character development, story line focus, outrageous passions artfully expressed. Professional work, thanks.
I normally don't make it thru many of these stories. This one held my interest from beginning to end, was very well written and left me wanting a sequel. Great work!
Yep. If you trained it, you might as well keep it.
Shot for story.