All Comments on 'Drive-in Blowjobs with my Sister'
by BuckyDuckman
- 35 Comments
sirhugs7 months agoBro-sis not my normal thing, but you did it exceptionally well, and the gay elements fit naturally.
A sequel with Dad involved?
OpenMan7 months agoReally hot story, except for the unnecessary racism in the middle. Author should NEVER try to write like a black man speaks, ever again. Degrading.
Weitze7 months agoGreat story, well told. Many directions can be taken starting the next morning after the 3 have had a shower and good nights sleep. I agree with Open Man about trying to write/talk ghetto. Was distracting.
Technical. Proofread. Towards the end, pages 4 & 5, you started using wrong words, same word twice (is XXX is, etc), mixed up names, etc. Proofreading will make a good story great.
Looking forward to chapter 2.
AydanFiore7 months agoI absolutely f*****g loved this story. Bi-sexual incest is so hot, especially when the boys swallow each other. I'd love to see this continue with maybe Dad getting involved somehow and Gary on his knees with his father's cock in his mouth.
Anonymous7 months agoStory was ruined by the derogatory names, completely broke the fantasy and escapism. Such a shame as the sexual fantasy aspect was good.
Anonymous7 months agoI wanted to enjoy this, loved the premise and do enjoy bi stuff but the constant "that's gay" and other references/comments were off putting and ruined for me. A little at the start was fine being his first time but not constant.
DewAzureToad7 months agoReally enjoyed this story but as OpenMan started, the “black talk” pulled me away a bit. Still, loved the brother/sister/bi-bro scenes. Good job
NudeInMaine7 months agoOMG…..so hot. This is reminiscent of my brother, his best friend, and me. Bro’s friend was bi…the 3 of us would play together, play with each other. We’d masturbate each other, I’d suck the boys, they’d seek each other. Then with my encouragement, my brother would fuck, get fucked by his friend. I wanted that. I lost my anal cherry first. Then a bit later on, my vaginal cherry. We’d enjoy MFM sex and DP sex. Bro lost touch with his best friend, but now hubby and i regularly fuck bro and his wife. We’re all bi!
CosmicMistake7 months agoGreat story! I would love to see a sequel to this. Maybe his sister offers up her ass to him if he takes one up his? I'd also love to see more of just the two of them.
jlk9257 months agoA incredible, sexual, sensual story about how two close male friends were able to trust each other and gain the rewards of total sexual bliss. Adding sister Suzanne was just magical as she displayed the most natural erotic sexuality I have ever read about. And who could believe how much true love can be shared between a brother and sister. A magnificent piece of erotica! Thank you very much BuckyDuckman
Anonymous7 months agoYou white folk are funny as shit. Leave the poor man alone. There's nothing wrong with how he wrote things. Sometimes, that's just how it sounds, you know?
enjoy_reading7 months agoAn excellent story and I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
mikeron6 months agoGreat story brings back memories of my older sister taking my best friend and I to Drive In movies back in the day. Joan would have us get naked and suck each other's cock while she watched.
Anonymous6 months agoGreat story. Loved the bi sex and the sister. There’s a lot here, enough for a sequel.
Stubbyone5 months agoA good story until you fucked it up big time with all that unnecessary derogatory name calling
I couldn’t finish it. A generous 2 because a lot was good. Why would you do something like that ??
No smiles. Bye !
Anonymous4 months agoGreat to see you back again, with a sizzlingly hot story of cocksucking and pussy fucking.
kinkyengr4 months agoWow!!! That was 'hot as fuck'. Would've loved to have a sister like Suzanne...and/or a friend like Mark. Gary's one lucky guy. Hopefully there's more cuming (misspelled intentionally) on this story line.
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