All Comments on 'Driver Wilde: A London Busman's Tale'

all the best with the contest - and ur also really good for a beginner.

I really enjoyed this story! The characters are believable (if a little "perfect" - but that happens) and I can certainly see why this is a fantasy of yours.

I identified with this, which is probably why I was so into it! I'll explain more about why in an email feedback. ;)

Great read, all the best with the contest and please do write more about their adventures, I'd love to read them.

Lou

and good luck with the contest!

You've got a good base there to build upon. I personally don't like seeing precise measurements in a story (boob/dick size etc) but other than that and a few hiccups in spelling and grammar (I am terrible for that myself actually) this was a fun little tale :)

Blimy...having met you(you now exactly who I am!), I woulf never have though you hasd such a dirty little mind...you dark horse you! Its not perfect, but for a first attempt it very impressive...well done!

Neat concept and setting. That's what I look for in a story more than anything else. I like original thinking. Your sound effect are awesome, too. A few little kinks in grammar and dialouge style, but I am confident you'll get better with practice. Heck, I've seen best selling authors who can't set a scene like yuo can. 2 thumbs up!

I really liked this story. As someone else says, the '9 inch' comment is a bit unrealistic and a few gramatic errors, I also hate the word c*nt but other than that, it got my clit twitching. I can't wait for part two ;)

Please continue this story. It was really amazing. I would like to know more about Bob and Katie's later adventures.

My wife loves to drive the car. she has an outfit she wears consists of a garter belt and nylons and no panties. When she gets in up goes the skirt to her waist,and a shaved pussy comes intro view. But the best thing is when she stops to get out she pulls her skirt way up and lets one leg out of the car spreading her knees way apart.If a guy is around it seems to take a long time before the second leg hits the ground . and the skirt is still way up. She loves for guys to see her pussy it makes her real hot