All Comments on 'Dropping by My Office'

by MajorR

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A pretty good hook ...

... but you need to bring us the rest of this story. As it stands, it is little more than a fragment.

Three stars for a promising start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good start

I agree. It's a really good star to something.

You should continue developping this story...and I do hope you use rope somewhere ;)

Josie

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