by DrowsDilemma
Getting a little frustrated by this story. Selene, Asher, and Caledir are all being written as total idiots and completely powerless, which isn’t fun to read about. I wouldn’t mind if Selene just decapitated Dahlia. Using a main character’s idiocy to get them into trouble is always far less engaging than events out of their control. And leaving a main character in their dilemma overly long also isn’t enjoyable for the readers. For some time now, there hasn't really been anything interesting going on so maybe this story has died or just become a weed.
I enjoyed the first 90 chapters but now you keep doing same thing over and over and none of main characters are willing to do anything to protect each other. Where is this goddess that wants sonmich for him. She should protect him. I'm just reading to finish it not that I'm enjoying it any longer