by guy_on_the_train
Unless he intends to use it in court I don't see what good it would do. He knows enough to get a divorce. Actually, he needs to beat the hell out of Paul [ballbat is positive]and find out about the drug in the process and sue his ass off on top of the beating.
He might decide to keep her but I doubt it.
Only ending I would like.
This story offered real promise, but as it grew by chapter after chapter, it got very disappointing! I rated it accordingly.
Just a friendly nudge to get those fingers moving again, so you can continue this awesome tale. :-)
JR Parz
you see your whore of a wife nake and you look.the shit read stupid dumbass.
He needed to end it when he caught them together in the hospitol, not slink out to his car and make plans as he,s driving home to screw her when she gets home,no need to write another chapter he,s a wimp husband so end it here ,he's already accepted her screwing the Doc. so as long as she works there he will have her anytime he wants her,THE END
A ball bat would get Pauls attention real fast. Instead of ending the story with the husband wimping out have him show some balls and slap the shit out of his wife and stomp the hell out of Paul. I rated your story very low because how you ended the story.
in which he gets evidence for blackmail and divorce. he needs to leave her sorry ass with nothing and take everything from the doctor. no reason not to use her cheating ass in the meantime. maybe he can find out how paul got to her and get a supply of the drug for himself. dicorce her, use the drug to make her turn tricks, retire on her earnings and find a new wife. hell, use the drug to turn paul into a male whore and live off the earnings from the 2 of them. that'd be perfect revenge.
Malapropism, homophones and homonyms...ever heard of them?