All Comments on 'Druid Chronicle Ch. 01'

Great start, looking forward to reading more.

This was very nice. Very enjoyable read.

Looking forward to the next one

This feels like a better version of the Runesmith Chronicle.

good job Salixx

Excellent first posting.

Very good.......

Need more please

This was really good, thanks.

So many of your sentences start with 'he.' I get that you're writing in third person but you can still add variety to your sentences besides writing ' He did this. He said that. He walked here.'

Great story! Thanks for letting me into your universe

Very good. I got wrapped in it and was entertained. Lots of questions to answer, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

THANKS

Pleasantly erotic without being salacious, and a genuine story, not just a preluse to sex. Very good! - Ted

What Ted said. A good story, carefully grown and tended, roots and flowers the erotic charge to much more satisfying ends, much like an alraune and her flowers and vines.