by m_storyman_x
He was being respectful to his drunk Mom after the shower ,, I just don’t understand why the neighbor got him first ,, then the neighbor and mom are lovers ,, yet mom never suntans while he’s mowing the lawn, just the neighbor,, and then they come home drunk again no underwear,, and then do a 3 way ,,mom is quiet as the neighbor explained their relationship,, I guess she’s the dominant one and mom is the submissive one ,,, it was a weird story ,,
3⭐️ for me,, just so much was left out of it to make sense
What an education, next lesson should be cleaning up those wet pussies until they cum again
That was so hot and I’ve been wanking the whole time I’ve been reading. I’m about to cum now
Reminds me when my parents divorced and Mom was a little wild for awhile coming drunk and I would help to bed 1st just peeking and and touching and finally licking her pussy and I remember the time she was full of Cum and I licked her pussy clean
Good imagination, typical storyline, emotions, and sex. A mother and son relationship would be an "Otherworldly" experience. You need to write a mother son story as an "Otherworldly" experience.
Your mother isn't just another woman.
Everything about a sexual relationship with your mother would take a son beyond the edge of anything anyone else could take him.
1. You need to lure your reader with more temptations and teasing.
2. Use better words to describe sexual bonding.
Example: "Celeste's breath upon Ty's ear was never meant for him, a mother's fervor should never possess a son being..."
3. There are almost countless ways to lure a reader into a risqué moment, back away, and lure the reader deeper over the edge.
You gave effort, and for that I applaud you. However, your writing tells me that you are capable of much better, a much deeper and deliciously slow burn.
It's kind of two different stories.
First, we have the reluctant son, understanding the risk and problems that go with getting involved with your mother sexually. And then, you have the porno. Slutty neighbor who, conveniently, is also fucking his mother and now wants to fuck him.
It's fun, but kind of a mess at the same time. Four stars.
Meh. Had really high hopes after the shower part, adding the neighbor ruined it for me.
When Mrs. Anderson said "I think we're going to have to educate your son on how to treat a woman after he fills her pussy."
I was hoping she was going to get him to lick his own cum out of her. I looove doing that for my mom and aunt. They love it too. Mom's favorite is when I dump a half load in her pussy, and the other half in her ass, and then me and aunt Jen lick both yummy holes clean!
Do the son his get his mother pregnant and son get neighbor lady pregnant was well
Agree with MaverickX, neighbor part ruined it, shoulda just had another of the first but where he can't stop himself.
I agree with the others, the first part with the mother was delightfully naughty, and I looked forward to more of that, so I was less excited about the neighbour stealing the show
Yeah I get its her life to live but he's right when her drinking starts infecting his life she's no longer being a mom and going out drinking all the time and fucking God knows who will and is infecting his life and her so called friend isn't any kind of friend letting her do it sorry I didn't like it she's a mom and 40 something years old she needs to grow up and act her damn age everyonce and while going out and partying is fine but not all the damn time like was explained in this story
I love drunk mom stories because it reminds me of how I started having sex at a much earlier age than most guys. My gorgeous skinny hot divorced but alcoholic mom would cab or Lyft home drunk, climb into bed with me naked, suck my cock hard, fuck me until she came 3 or 4 times and I had cum twice in her velvet glove pussy, then she'd get up go to her bed and the next morning not remember she let her son sexually assault her the night previous.
You see, mom would black out once she was drunk and only after you experience her transition from sober to drunk, you'd know when she'd enter her black-out phase. Her eyes became bedroom eye slits and she'd start talking dirty, slightly slurring her words. Her usually nice demeanor transformed into a sensuous, snarling sex kitten in heat.
I found out a few years later how mom's incestuous behavior started. When she was young, she'd often go to her older brother's bed with the pretext she was scared, and she'd often catch him masturbating. But that did not deter her. She'd merely watch as he'd finish then gstarted joining her older brother in his bed.
I would bike to the bar the next day and retrieve her car.
Pretty hot read although it went waay over the top....
But what a sexy fantasy....Every guy's dream having two horny females...
4 stars....
Sounds like Mom's turned into a drunken slut. I'm aware that STD isn't an issue in Litrotica, but if it was real I'd make her get tested before fucking her again. No telling what she's brought home. I liked the story but it went way beyond the mother/son loving story when Mrs. Anderson got involved with both Eddie and his mother. Not sure if losing your virginity in the bushes in the backyard is as good as the backseat at the drive-in or not, but I'm not knocking it, just wondering. Mrs. Anderson may have a great pussy but the fact that she's cheating on her husband should raise a red flag with Eddie's mother. Afterall she just got dumped by a cheating husband. It would have been a better mother/son incest story without the cheating nextdoor neighbor slut.