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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story but....

Actually it was a great story, one randy sister. But you know why the but! Please read your story out loud to yourself, or even better someone else, and pick up on those silly editing mistakes. Reading aloud or having a proof reader makes a huge improvement when errors are fixed. Looking forward to the next story. Thanks

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