All Comments on 'Drunken Revenge'

Altogether a fun story with some very good descriptions of idiot drunkenness and some of the inane conversations that can go with it. Some nice bits of bitchiness, too, from Sabrina talking about the dreadful Carly. You should try some more humorous tales like this---you certainly seem to have a knack for it.

Damn - thought this raunchy tale was fantastic. Word craft/description was spot on. And I can easily imagine more play between Carly and Sabrina - why not. You write well.

Thanks for writing a story displaying the mistakes that are made under the influence.