by betaquartz
Stop....Don't!
Stop....Don't! Stop....
Don't Stop.....Don't Stop!!!
Lucky Uncle....
Nice short story.....
4 stars
That was really hot, however.....
You should use the editors they have on the site here for the authors. The writing could have used some touching up, which is what the editors are for. You're a good writer, you should definitely keep it up! If you make use of the editors, then the errors won't be there in the future to detract from the story itself.
so hot and erotic from the very first.......lets hear some more of uncle bill his neice