All Comments on 'Dual Healing'

Love the story. Definitely a second chapter ,please. AAAAAA++++++

Good story. Waiting for the dad to come out as gay.

Absolutely love this, Pt. 2 soon?

Great story second part mom gets another child and sister confesses she knew about the two of them and wants to share with mother

Love to have a second chapter

Let me join the chorus calling for a chapter two! I'm hoping that it skips ahead (at some point) to Hayley's eighteenth birthday... I have a feeling things will get really interesting. 5/5* Fav

Let me join the chorus calling for a second chapter with the sister turning 18 and joining the mom and brother in bed! Five stars and a favorite point!

What an excellent story! It was well paced, nice and slow. The developing relationship was so well written. Thank you. I will be waiting for the next installment.

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hope theres more

Wonderful! A second chapter would be great…and a third, fourth, etc!

Great story as always. Can’t wait for chapter 2. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

What was the point of even mentioning the sister if nothing happens and she never shows up in the story again?

Really looking forward to Pt. 2

Absolutely 💯 need a pt 2. Fantastic Job. Keep the story going

Chapter 2-20 would be appreciated. :)

That was lovely. Chapter two must certainly find Mum giving her daughter away to her son, with Hayley wearing virginal white as Tom becomes her first and only, all the while mummy is caressing the two of them, cooing at their union. No jealousy, only love. And babies for both women, cuz their love for each other just can't be contained, with everyone "...drowning in a sea of love, where everyone would love to drown..." Sara, Fleetwood Mac

more of these characters please

The slow buildup was slow and agonizing but when the dam busted, holy crap!!! Don't need all the garters and sexy lingerie for a woman to be sexy. A woman in her everyday panties and bra are such more sexy than all the high dollar stuff from Victoria's Secret, at least IMHO. I was wondering what was going to happen to Hayle, guess we'll just have to wait for the next chapter, hint, hint. At least give Hayle the satisfaction of seeing how a loving family can function. Five stars for a great mother/son incest story that's sexy as all get out.

Yeah as others have said please take this where it is obvious it should go.

Good story, enjoyed it.

Would very much like you to continue this please.

Many thanks for sharing with us all.

Yes please to the second chapter. And yes please to where it's going. :D

Please, the second chapter is needed.

I am so looking forward to reading he next chapter when it is published. I think that everyone who reads your work knows just what happens in it but does mom have a sister who needs a little attention and what about Hayley she should wait until prom night. I hope that they make it back home before she is deflowered

Excited to hear there may be a part 2!

Can't wait for part two

Looking forward to the sister's 18th BD and consummation of the feelings between the sister and brother. With Mom's blessing of course and assistance/involvement.

Nicely done, I love the buildup. We can aso see where the story will go.

One small error - Hayley is 16 going on 18?

Part two will be great, also!

Of course, the mother has to end up getting pregnant. And it is very obvious that Haley will be fucked by her brother. It would also be sweet to have Haley get pregnant with her brother's baby.

I enjoyed the story. Looking forward to the next story line

Shaved pussy sucks, nasty Razor burn anmd stubble is just fucking sickening!

Hairy pussy is fabulous, you can bury your face in the tangy musky aroma and eat it for hours! they are also so fucking beautiful to look at. Perfectly framed in hair! Nothing like raking the hair back to eat it- huge clits are best! I often did that to my mom's sexy dark black-haired pussy! Mom pussy (mature) should just be hairy. So should mother-in-law and older sister pussy? All pussy needs hair! No nasty chicken butt images!

Phenomenal. Thank you so much.

Loved it glad she kicked her worthless husband to the curb and continued her sex with her son!! Hope you continue with this and I think I know how it's going to be looking forward for next chapter 5 stars

Excellent story and very well written - just a pleasure to read

Wonderful! I hope you do write a part two.

Really hope there is a sequel to keep the story going. Especially when the sister turns 18

5 stars

Looking forward to the next chapter

Responding to Walkindatdog: No insult intended, but the family you envision would be more suited to a remote woodland cabin in the hills of West Virginia.

Absolutely hope you write that next chapter.

Definitely needs a second chapter and hopefully soon.

You have some of the best stories on this site and, you did not disappoint with this one! Fantastic and I too hope for a sequel!!

Please continue with the second part. Looking forward to seeing the mother and son starting a family soon. Would love to see the account of how the mother's belly swells with a child

Good story and some nice comments by reviewers. I especially liked the one about the chicken butt. Shaved pussy often does look nasty and they sometimes do suck. No hair, they can look nasty especially when they are covered with pus filed pimples and stubble poking out of the pustules, No F'-ing way something like that would ever get into my bed! Hairy pussies often just look nice. the hair is like a picture frame that encloses the clit and cunt lips. There is also nothing like eating an enormously hairy pussy that was freshly washed about an hour before oral. Keep on writing, keep them hairy!!!

Enjoyable andhoping for more.

As always your stories are the best. Please do more parts to this one.

Very nice!

Love to read more about Tomm and his family!

Please have more escapades with mom but also maybe a section about what he gets Hayley for her 18th birthday and maybe some mom daughter son fun

Yeah, it definitely is leading to Tom being with Hailey as well. If he doesn't understand what she's asking for on her eighteenth, he's a bit daft.

Speaking of daft, I forgot to mention I loved the story. It feels like there should be some sort of explanation for the father. Felt like he was gay and using her as a beard. 5* nonetheless, but I do hope we get a second chapter.

hayley will join the fun

5/5! Lovely romance and so well written. Chapter 2 with Hailey and Mom would be an epic! Thanks for writing this wonderful story!

Yes you must write part 2.

Shadracht, if he is daft, Mum will set him straight. Part 2 please.

Hot! Need ch 2 with the three of them together.

Excellent, looking forward to chapter 2

A contender to be on my top 10 favorite stories this year. This was incredible

Good 5⭐️ story ,,, the only thing that he didn’t do once dad left and to bring them closer together was call her by her first name. She is his girlfriend now ,,

I think that if a chapter 2 is coming up and I know that sister will be involved with her brother.

Is this going to be a shared story or a 3some type ,,, just don’t make mom a prior lesbian for it where the son/brother gets pushed away in it

Great story, nice build up. Would love to see anal play and seducing sister in the next chapter.

for sure a second chapter, maybe a timeskip until the sister turns 18

Just some things that could happen.

Received major money from the accident

Before sister is 18, she wants to experience oral sex

Before he can change beneficiary's Dad dies however and Mom gets the money.

Anyway, it was a great story!

A lovely story with a few possible twists on the horizon, I would love a sequel to wrap it up, he really needs to take care of his sister when she turns 18, giving her one or more children if she wants that, taking care of both the loves in his life.

Thank you for sharing this story with us.

Excellent!!!!! Yes, absolutely, bring a couple more of stories. Love your writing and storyteller skills.

Pls continue the story

Yes, please continue. Would like to see the mum delivering her son's child

Loved the story. Perfectly paced, and rewarding. Please write the second chapter, and maybe a third. Thank you for this chapter, anyway.

Loved reading this. My only concern is Hayley accepting and even being in love with Tom too. Looking forward to the next phase, if there is one.

As to the dad,is he really not bothered, is there a sub story there. Sounds like he gave in too easily. Perhaps that's all there is, fallen out of love.