All Comments on 'Ducklings'

Very well written!

I sincerely hope there’s more to this story - I am keen to explore Carinne’s love of tickling a little further! ;)

Lovely written story. Excellent charactar portrayal and story line build up.

What a lovely story, and so well-told. A fine piece -- thank you -- five stars.

Loved "Ducklings", so cute and funny, but all the time I was reading I thought there was something familiar about the style; nice to see a new one from you Smokey

One of the most beautiful erotic love stories I've ever read.

A very charming and touching story, leaving the reader certain that the 'ducklings' will turn into the loveliest of swans. Shows there's hope for everyone.

thanks for this story.

Jamie and Carinne seem perfect for each other. You write with such clarity i feel i know them .

Love the dialogue Jamie has with her self , when making a decision and reasoning with her self.

Look forward to more tickling.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

A magnificent and beautiful story.

Well done! Robertodavo. A.k.a. Robert Davidson

Such a sweet story. Jamie and Carinne are so adorably cute.

Beautiful !

Found it annoying that you kept using the word paw instead of hand.

I didn't want the story to end. It leaves me with a warm fuzzy. Quite delightful.

Will there be another chapter, hope so!!!!!!

Amongst legally blind people, the ones who are profoundly blind (no sight at all) from birth are relatively rare. Discussing what kind and degree of blindness Carinne has would definitely be part of getting to know her. Also, blind-from-birth people usually have no desire to see, because they don't miss it.

That song Seventeen hits home for me. I can't listen to it without the tears starting up. Thanks for putting it in a romantic context, that was very nice.

I like your story, it's a sweet little romance, full of laughter and fun.

Paws, lassies, and a couple of other descriptors sure seemed out of place; and took away from the situation when they were used. Otherwise, an enjoyable story. Thank you!