by Egmont Grigor
You Lout - Stop it - Amelicans right ok - not smeel like feeesh!
Gosh you'r so sensible every third word when sober - most enjoyable - now lighten up and thanks - more please.
I found this to be hilarious despite the very rushed ending and the rather choppy writing. i appreciated the fanciful approach to the story. very good job in keeping her inhuman despite her attempts to appear human. it reminded me of the TV series "Third Rock from the Sun". i did wonder if Fleetcloud was successful in her attempt to repopulate her planet though.
Yeah, maybe it could've been fleshed out a little more, but it was marvelously whimsical. And, in its own way, it left me wanting more of this vein.